[Jones]

Is here ok or is there some other place you would prefer?

[harvard1932]

You can do it here.

[Jones]

Incorrect: You just received daily event reward!

Should read: You just received a daily event reward!

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Incorrect: Locks Twilight's soul when she die.

Correct: Locks Twilight's soul when she dies.

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Incorrect: It all because of the war.

Correct: It's all because of the war.

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Should be "This fishing spot contains..." "This rock contains..." and "this book contains..." respectively.

I'll explain this one further since this seems to be a common grammatical error you make.

Contains is correct: "This rock contains 3 resources"
Contain is correct "These rocks contain 3 resources"

Contains is correct: "This book contains information"
Contain is correct: "These books contain information"

By the way darkky, if you don't mind me asking, what country are you from? Somewhere in eastern Europe?